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AWA 6 分心得体会 - 2

[日期:2006-10-25] 来源:ChaseDream论坛 作者:lisiyin [字体: ]

2 反驳型,就是对题目的观点完全鄙视,直接抽他,这种比较容易写.(但仍然记得,即使论断是错的,也不可能一无是处,还是应该稍微提一下他的对的地方,表明你思维的判断力和辨证性)

129. “Instead of relying on the advice of outside experts, organizations should place greater value on the advice that can come only from their own highly experienced employees.”(我的观点是都应该听,分场合听,分侧重点听)

2.1

开头(比较容易写,直接复述就ok) The author argues that 啥啥啥.Posed this way,the author assumes that员工牛比,外面的声音没用(这个写法是相当于把题目改了一下更适合于攻击,把他极端化呵呵,同时posed this way这种变换的句市也是受gmat欢迎的) 自己的观点 while 员工应该用在specific loophole,以及提升 工艺效率等方面,外部专家的意见对 企业的战略和 长远发展是有极大作用的.(开头对后面的2段有提示作用,显示结构的清晰)

2.2On one hand员工意见好,有啥作用(总论)1,2,3 缺点1,2 最后总结,适合在企业啥啥时用

2.3on the other hand 企业外部意见好,有啥作用(总论)好处1,2,3 最后总结适合的场合

总结...

呵呵,这个题目不是太典型,我找一个更典型的. ai132

132. “Governments should not be responsible for regulating businesses and other organizations. Instead, society would benefit if the organizations themselves assumed responsibility for establishing and enforcing their own standards and regulations.”

开头The author claims that ….. Posed this way, the author means that 政府没责任.on the contrary ,government should instead take the major responsibility.(论点)

中间

1,先谈政府的缺陷(适当的表明自己的深度,咱可没一位说政府好,要企业一边去,政府也有不好)

1,admittedly, government regulation seems costly and low-efficient since 政府需要很多 external data provider 来了解不同的行业,制订不同的标准,much later than …特别是工业领域,排放pollutants这里。

2谈政府即使有缺陷还是应该用政府,因为企业的句大缺陷,和政府的优势.

2 however,这个缺陷的存在 cannot rationalize(使合理化) the self-regulation.

因为啥啥啥1,2,3公司目标,利润最大花,市场market value 最大化,监管目标是保证公司运作是符合社会要求的,in accordance with the social welfare in general. Contradicts,liable to fraud.比如 manufacturer responsible to set standards for emitting polluting gas,the residue of certain process, would find that compliance with generally-accepted standards too costly .

同时,企业不可能根据自身行业的perspective  来制订standards.缺乏独立性,不能保证regulation implemented. 所以必须由第3方政府监管。

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