一战GMAT760 AWA6 模板分享
2014/5/27 14:08:06

今天出了作文成绩,最后一块石头也终于落地了,在CD上得到了太多,现在是回馈的时候了~想跟大家说我并不是什么大牛,至少在作文方面绝对是后天练出来的。不像很多NN考前几天就把AWA搞定,楼主是考前三礼拜就开始着手准备,花两天时间了解作文七宗罪还有总结一套自己的模板,之后每天花半小时背诵模板,考前两周每天用模考软件练两篇。因为楼主生怕作文打不完或是因为作文分数过低需要重考,心想这样就太可惜了,足够有自信的小伙伴们就不需要花这么多精力在AWA上啦~
现在把我的模板分享给大家,希望对大家有所帮助~不过提醒一下绝对不要照抄网上任何一套模板,被判雷同就悲剧了,一定要吸收各方精华后总结出一套属于自己的模板。
最后祝各位CDer取得自己理想的成绩~~加油~
文章总模板In this XXX (argument), the author concludes that 结论主张目标, citing the fact/reason that前提事实原因一. What’s more, the author points out that 前提事实原因二. While this argument seems reasonable, it is nevertheless unacceptable to embrace the credibility of this argument after careful scrutiny.In the first place, it is mentioned that …… The author unfairly assumes that ……
Therefore, it is highly doubtful that ……In the second place, stated in this argument is a fact that…… The author's conclusion relies on the gratuitous assumption that ……
Therefore, in face of such limited evidence, the conclusion turns out to be less well backed.Last but not the least, the author tells us the conclusion that…… He or she might have been attempting to mislead us into believing that …...
Therefore, with no regard to …… (all of these and other possibilities/differences/a thorough cost-benefit analysis), it is fallacious to draw the conclusion at all.After analyzing the reasoning line and the use of evidence in this argument, it requires more improvement in several aspects. Instead of simply relying on the evidence given so far, the author ought to provide credible evidence about    , eliminate other factors that may result in    , or take into account other issues discussed above.
调查问题
In the first place, one possible problem in this argument involves the survey itself. As we all know, the smaller the sample size is, the less reliable the result of the survey is. So, if the number of the participants in the survey is too small, it will be highly doubtful whether the conclusion is credible. In addition, the author provides no evidence to ensure that those who responded to the survey are representative of the whole group. Those who were more interested in XX might be more likely to respond to the questionnaire. Due to the lack of randomness and representativeness in the survey sample, the statistical reliability of the survey will be really dubious.
内容补充
(1)assume/assumption that +  (2)However+
1) 他因 B is determined solely by A. While A is a seemingly important element in determining B, it is hardly the only or even necessarily required one. The author omits the possibility of other alternative facts that …… It is entirely possible that .... It is equally possible that .... Moreover, perhaps ....
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