tware will increase the

company's profits.



Overall, the arugment omits some very significant factors that should have been taken into consideration, so it is

neither convincing nor persuasive. To bolster the conclusion, more evidences should be provided in the arugument.

Only by doing this can the argument be more compelling and logical.





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